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commit d33b9e21dce5d708827ffe72a2840932394afc31
parent 8ed24a59878543ec0df5fccc14e56e07ce4642cb
Author: Chris Bracken <chris@bracken.jp>
Date:   Wed, 15 Sep 2021 15:59:56 -0700

Wording cleanup

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diff --git a/content/post/2011-05-10-moving-to-us-letter-of-compliance.md b/content/post/2011-05-10-moving-to-us-letter-of-compliance.md
@@ -6,10 +6,11 @@ tags = ["Canada", "Howto", "USA"]
 +++
 
 A big difference between the last time I moved to the US and this time is that
-this time, I've got a lot more stuff. One of those things is a recent-vintage
-Nissan. Faced with the prospect of selling my car and buying a new one, I chose
-instead to import the one I know and love. Here is my story. But be
-forewarned, it is not for the faint of heart.<!--more-->
+this time, I've got a lot more stuff. One of those things is a Nissan Rogue
+that's been quietly living its life in Canada. Faced with the prospect of
+selling the car and buying a new one, I chose instead to import the one I know
+and love.  Here is my story.  But be forewarned, it is not for the faint of
+heart.<!--more-->
 
 {{< figure src="/post/2011-05-10-futile.jpg"
     alt="Scrawny kid vs sumo wrestler" >}}